Echoes
DipVai
1/17/20252 min read
It was raining the day she decided to leave. Not the kind of rain that poured in torrents, but a soft drizzle that blurred the edges of the world. Nia stood by the window, her suitcase resting by the door, a quiet witness to her choice. The apartment smelled faintly of coffee and rain-soaked earth—a strange, bittersweet mix of comfort and farewell.
Ayan sat on the couch, his head buried in his hands. He hadn’t spoken much since she told him. He was always the talkative one, the one who filled silences with laughter or stories of impossible dreams. But now, silence stretched between them, thick and suffocating.
“I thought we had more time,” he finally whispered, his voice cracking.
“So did I,” Nia replied, her words soft but resolute. She turned away from the window to face him. His eyes, red-rimmed and glassy, met hers. The love they shared was still there, alive and aching, but some loves weren’t meant to last, even when they burned brightly.
“Why?” Ayan asked, though he already knew the answer. It wasn’t a single moment or a specific fight—it was the slow unraveling of two people growing apart, their dreams pulling them in different directions. She wanted to travel, to chase the horizon, while he wanted to plant roots, to build a home.
She walked over and sat beside him. “We’ve tried, Ayan. We’ve tried everything. And I love you—I always will. But love isn’t enough if we can’t give each other what we need.”
He nodded, though his heart screamed in protest. “I just don’t know how to say goodbye to you.”
Nia reached for his hand, her fingers trembling as they intertwined with his. “We don’t have to say it like it’s an ending. Maybe it’s just a different beginning—for both of us.”
The rain outside grew heavier, a rhythm of nature that seemed to echo the storm within them. Ayan leaned back, his chest rising and falling with deep, unsteady breaths. “Promise me something,” he said.
“Anything,” Nia replied.
“Promise me you’ll find what you’re looking for.”
Her throat tightened, and tears welled up in her eyes. “I promise,” she whispered.
She stood, reluctantly letting go of his hand. The weight of the moment pressed down on them as she walked to the door. Her fingers hovered over the handle before she turned back one last time. Ayan was still on the couch, staring at the space where she had been. She wanted to run to him, to erase the distance that had grown between them, but instead, she said the only thing she could.
“Goodbye, Ayan.”
And with that, she stepped out into the rain, leaving behind the echoes of a love that had been beautiful but wasn’t meant to last.
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